The day dawns near when you come home
Come home to your dwelling place
Somewhere within me, a space so pure
A sacred space where clear waters flow gently
Calmly, eternally, washing away scars and wounds
Gathered along the voyage of life.
A voyage we undertook, each choosing our own way
Still we could see the way of the other
Through the looking glass, that thin wall of separation
Oftentimes I see and feel
What you yourself fail to realize
I perceive your heaviness, the fruits often bitter
As you sow the seeds of the same weeds
Sown by countless men chain-bound
Who struggle to bind even tighter those around.
Could you see me through the looking glass?
As I naively allowed a hundred loves
Into my altar, sacred, reserved for you
But the clear waters of the spring within
Scorched them all, reaching boiling point
On touching the tainted mockery pretending to be love.
We try not to hear the hidden plea for love
In the words we hurl at each other
We try not to see the love in our eyes
Hidden behind the veil of indifference
I desperately try to breathe in your essence
From your presence behind the looking glass
I can see the road stretching ahead of you
I see it, converging eventually with mine, to my doorstep.
Copyright ©2019angelbeamsblog
Picture : Aline at the gate. Pierre Auguste Renoir paintings reproduction
Very touching. I love the imagery of glass in between as ‘the thin wall of separation’
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Thank you. Imagination is limitless like the sky.. .😀
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Magnifique ! belle description de la tromperie amoureuse 🙂
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Oui, Il y a toujours le vrai et le faux, le bien et le mal. Mais c’est difficile de distinguer entre les deux, et on apprend seulement par l’expérience. Merci d’avoir partagé votre pensée.
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Oui je suis d’accord avec vous on n’apprend par l’expérience ! Bonne soirée Nita 🙂
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A superlative penning… you’re a most excellent writer!
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Thank you so much for your encouraging words.😊
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What a beautiful and powerful post. Well done.
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Thank you for your kind words. It’s really appreciated.
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So beautiful…the longing palpable with every word….LOVE!!!
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Yes, eventually don’t we all live for this feeling? ☺. Thank you for your appreciation. I’m happy to know there are other like-minded people in this world.
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💞💞
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je trouve ton texte magnifiquement écrit , un mélange d’expression entre endroit aimé , et être aimé vraiment beau à lire et touchant , tu es vraiment une excellente écrivaine et poète Bravo ❤
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Merci beaucoup Venus. C’est gentil de ta part de l’avoir tant apprécié . 😊
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Beautifully written and deserving of a wider audience 🙂
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Thank you so much for your kind words. Genuine appreciation like yours and a few loyal readers mean much more to me than just numbers. ☺
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Bonjour ou Bonsoir BELLE ANGE
Tu vois
Avec beaucoup de sincérité
Je suis mon cœur
Il a ses pensées , ses choix et ses propres idées
C’est alors et seulement
Que l’on devient acteur de sa vie
Il faut dans la vie savoir aussi
Tendre la main à qui en a besoin
Sans en espérer un retour
Juste se dire que c’était bien
Alors s’installe une belle harmonie avec soi-même
Je te souhaite ce qu’il y a de meilleur
Profite bien , belle journée
Bisous , Amitié Bernard
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Bonjour ou bonsoir Bernard, merci beaucoup pour ce beau poème. ☺
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Coming home to that place within, that sweetness – God, Jesus, the self, our twin flame we all have our own words – becoming living-stones. When we arrive we realize we never left, carried by the wings of our true-love every step of the way.
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How true your words! We may choose different paths for the same experience, but we never really leave. One has to arrive home eventually. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
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Ahhhhhh amazingly written. Just beautiful!!
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Glad to know you think so. Thank you for your appreciation. 😊
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Absolutely 🤗 this touched me. That’s what beauty can do. Thank you!
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Poetry’s purpose is to touch human hearts. I’m honoured that I could do it to you. 😘
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